Persisting To The Top

              “Come on Toby we’re halfway there,” Sofia said

cheerfully. “I can do it,” I said to myself. I was determined to get to the top and I was
going to try as hard as I could until I got there. So Sofia, Holly, Mum and I continued
on the mission.

My face was deep red when Sofia said in a amazed voice. “Hey Toby look at that big
waterfall,”I turned my head to see the waterfall. “That means we are nearly there,”Mum
said making sure that we think she’s smart. “Thank goodness,”Holly said with joy.
That made me feel better so I started speeding up.

Finally, we reached the top I fell to the ground . When I finally stopped puffing,
I felt very proud of myself as I did something that I thought I couldn’t do

After all I was very happy with myself and I wanted to do it again, just kidding im not
doing that again!